For the days of November 18th 20th and
22nd
This
week in the grade ten honors class the focus was on essay writing. Much to my
surprise the standard 5 paragraph essay wasn’t the norm, actually, it was
discouraged. Graduating from high school recently, I found it really great that
Geoff was discouraging the standard format so early. Coming to college and only
knowing how to write a five paragraph essay was a hindrance for me. And seeing
these kids really get creative with writing lead to some amazing results, and inevitably
variety in their skill. Class time was heavily awarded to writing these essays,
so I spent majority of time going around to kids who needed help. Reading
exerts from the essays and helping them edit certain sentence was very
enjoyable for me. I really feel accepted in the classroom and valued for my
help by the kids, having this relationship has been extremely motivating for
me. I know that this career choice is exactly what I want to do with my life.
In the 30-2 classroom this week, the students were finishing up with the novel
study on “Night”. They were assigned a final project on the book giving 7
options of response to the novel to suit all the learning types. After Geoff
explained all the details of the project to the class, I went to help an ESL
student catch up on another assignment in the hall. I will call this student Y.
For the assignment I was helping him with, he needed all his notes from the
chapters of the book, but he had lost many of them, and didn’t do the other
portion. So we worked collaboratively to read through the chapters and find
quotes that helped him to complete the assignment. It was clear that Y was very
foggy on what exactly the assignment was asking from him, but when I explained
and checked for understanding he would immediately agree, even if he didn’t understand.
I saw Y’s tactics, he wanted to fit in, he wanted to understand the material and
show he could do it on his own. But what Y didn’t understand was that I see how
smart he is, and his ability to complete the assignment, I see that it’s simply
a language barrier. At this point, I stopped and asked him about Thurber, if he
liked it here? And he opened up to me, he shared that he used to live in
southern Alberta and he moved to Canada when he was 8. We continued a personal
conversation for a few minutes and returned to work. I could tell immediately the
comfort level had changed, not tremendously, but he was more open with me. I
offered him extra help to finish that assignment after school on my next visit.
I think students like Y really need to be shown clearly your understanding of
how the language barrier holds them back, and not intelligence. After talking to
Geoff about Y, he agreed with me about Y’s reluctance to ask for help or
clarification. But I didn’t believe that Geoff had talked to Y on a personal
level to show his interest in Y as an individual who just needs extra
clarification due to language, not intellect.
One very interesting method Geoff used this week, while
helping the Grade nines write essays was that “arrow test”. This test was a
simple way for students to check the context of their work, making sure that the
ideas they are using stay in line with the thesis of their essays. This test
simply asks students to take the _ line down in the second paragraph and read
it aloud, while they read it Geoff asked them to be thinking about their thesis
statements and making sure they were congruent. This simple exercise got
students to focus on how important a thesis statement is throughout and entire
essay. I’m truly enjoying my time at Thurber, though it does take up virtually
all of my extra time with work, school, and homework. It has been a great kick
start into my career, I’ve already been asking for any volunteer work I can
participate in next semester when I’m done my field experience. I love being in
the school.
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